Composing
the Quite Marsh by
Gwen Nagel

Marsh
Path, St. Simons by Gwen Nagel
Subject
and Composition:
I was attracted to the marsh
on St. Simon’s Island because of the subtle colors of its grasses
juxtaposed against a brilliant blue sky. I paint marshes in Georgia and
in Maine, where I live in
the summer, and they never fail to engage me.
Marshes, however, can pose
some composition problems. They are, after all, flat things, and
unless
you get a high vantage point they can prove very flat and uninteresting
indeed.
The path leading into the clump of trees was just the
composition I wanted. That there was
distant detail in the far shore
with a smattering of buildings catching the light gave the scene
much
more interest. The snake line of blue water suggested marsh, and the
shadows on the
path provided me with an echo of the pattern of darks.
This was an unusually pleasing
composition for a mars
Materials, Sketch and
Block in:
I use Kitty Wallis paper
almost exclusively and a wide assortment of pastels, both hard and
soft:
Nu-Pastels, Rembrandts, Sennelier, Schminke, Unison, Great American, and
Terry Ludwig’s.
On location I make a simple sketch with very thin
willow charcoal, finding my focal point first
(in this case, the tree on
the right). I establish the horizon line, then set up the
lead in with
the road.
When I’m satisfied with that I begin to think about my
darks. (At this point, in my studio,
I may get out some turpentine and
rough brushes to lightly go over the dark pattern.) I generally
use a
complement, especially on trees, so I might do a turp wash with a deep
reddish brown. T
his is a blocky stage; I work quickly and I try to get
in a lot of deep color.
Because Kitty Wallis paper has such a lot of
tooth, I may use Nu Pastels for the block in.
I look for more darks, as
for example, in the shadows of the road, and find a pattern that is
pleasing.
I make sure I have color in my shadows: purple and blue and
deep red.
I then block in, again with
complements, big masses of the marsh. These are mostly mid-tones
and I
want them to hold a lot of interest. It is tempting to start doing the
details (the linear strokes of the grasses) too soon, but I am
interested in the colors and shapes in the marsh, not the
quotidian
detail of grasses. And I’ve been there before: too many strokes too
soon and I lose my big shapes. So I refrain from doing that until very
late in the painting. This is really the fun
part for me—establishing
blocks of color in what might appear to be simple, flat marsh. I use
Unisons and all the delicious colors I dare put in the painting. I make
sure that I am anchoring
the grass, so I provide a deeper value at the
base of the grasses. I enjoy using the sides of
Terry Ludwig pastels for
marsh shapes—but I may reserve them for later. I may still be working
with harder pastels against the rough Kitty Wallis paper. I try to work
all over the painting at once,
to establish all the shapes. I sometimes
give the paper a quick spray with Krylon to anchor the
pastel to the
paper.
Focal Point
I may then work on the focal point, the two clumps of trees adding
detail to give overall shapes.
Then I turn to the distant tree line. I
need to make that fall back, but there is color this morning in those
distant shapes, so I again block in complementaries and purples (to
anchor the trees) and then work
over them with greens and blues.
A
pinkish beach line and a touch here and there to indicate buildings
catching the light, and I’m done.
About 45 minutes before I think the
painting will be completed, I may give the whole piece a quick spray.
I
generally try not to spray once I start putting in the highlights and
details, as it may darken and dull them.
If I have a passage I want
darker, I may just spray it.
The Light Values and
Details
The path is light in value, but I want it to have a lot of interest
and color, so I over block in some darks
(the brown shapes of the
earth). It is only after I’ve put in my darks in the road (shadows,
brown of the
earth, some green grasses) that I start stroking in the
lights of the path, making sure I have enough
color in the path and that
the lights don’t go “too light” on me and I end up with
“chalky” color.
I save the details for last.
Again I may get out my NuPastels or use the sharp end of a Terry Ludwig
stick to establish the branches of the main tree, some other little
shrub here and there. I insert the
highlights in the trees. I sparingly
stroke in a few grasses, just enough to “read grass.” A few spots
of
white here and there suggest some detail of flowers which echo the
distant whites of the buildings.
On location I don’t usually drag
along a mat, but I always have one ready in my studio to put
around the
painting. A mat around my work usually tells me when a painting is done,
or what
might be needed to complete the piece. I usually will take the
plein air piece back to my studio and
look at it an hour or so later to
see if there are infelicities here and there or details that need a
touch
or two of a pastel, but I am aware that it is very easy to ruin a
plein air piece in the studio with too much
detail, so I’m careful not
to overwork it. ■
Marsh Path, Original Pastel Gwen
Nagel ©2006